1 CAMPING Hello my name is Jason Chu , i want to talk about the camping things and what things i was
do and pratice . 19th,january morning , sunny,our class were meet in SUN TAI centre. we are happy and
excited we all think about the camp, what we will do and see any things ? 19th january afternoon we are all go to the camp we see many things first we see a angry
man stand between our team he say this is a scared camp if you are scared you can go
home first we are welcome . An then we go to the hall to hear who is our teacher and what
things we will do finish the talk we know who is our teacher he is ............Hung....sir , before
his name is Hung Yeah chinese mean''洪爺'' ,woo, this name is cool but it is very scared too.
19th.january night we will have a yummy dinner but we don't have say every teacher eating
dinner and we don't have help the children so we need to run and frog jump and sit-up and
we learn one thing is "heart" .After the dinner we go to our sleep place and call our
parents and let them know we are safe don't worry finish the call, we go to sleep, i sleep in B01 room
inside have three small rooms i and Antony Fung sleep together we are happy because i am
sleep with another people first time.
20th,january morning 8:00 -8:30 we eat the breakfast we just have 30 minutes but we need
to eat all the food if have one noodles 10 sit-up so we are very fast fast to eat.Finish the
breakfast we are very happy becase we eat all the food ^_ ^ (O_o).Finish the breakfast we will play a game i don't know what is this english but chines is"^鼻_頂_球 ^"this game need a team heart if you don't have ""you just go home sleep"" .
20th,january afternoon
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Hello Jason I feel happy after reading your posting because although the sentences are long and with few punctuations I fully understand what you were trying to say and can feel your joy in the camp (this is also a long sentence without punctuation. How do you find it?) Well done!
thankyou
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